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Post by skylark on Jul 11, 2009 6:45:01 GMT
who turned green. Dr Logan, on the other hand, was busily consuming a large quantity of cheese.
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Post by maggie on Jul 11, 2009 7:53:07 GMT
"You're going to be on that slab yourself" said Williams to Dr Logan, "if you continue eating vast quantities of cheese."
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Post by PeterL on Jul 11, 2009 8:53:02 GMT
When I started this story it was my intention that it would be a detective story with each post following on from the last in some sort of logical order But all that seems to have long since gone by the board with posts about some one called Moto Fiasco who crashes through sky lights and others about cheese
Which is making this story read more like a Monty Python Sketch Than a detective story
Perhaps it is time to start a new story Only this time can we please , please, please stick to the plot
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Post by objector on Jul 11, 2009 10:18:45 GMT
it was moto who started it...yer ner
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Post by skylark on Jul 11, 2009 12:45:54 GMT
Oi - I'm the continiuity girl, haven't you noticed? There was a cheese clue earlier and I'm running with it. The cheek.
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Post by maggie on Jul 11, 2009 13:12:50 GMT
Hang on a sec, whats wrong with a Monty Python sketch or a bit of humour?
Peter is a spoil sport! p.s. I bet you've forgotten that it was also supposed to be a ghost story about Murder in a Haunted House!!
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Post by PeterL on Jul 11, 2009 14:05:22 GMT
Hang on a sec, whats wrong with a Monty Python sketch or a bit of humour?
Peter is a spoil sport! I hope not Not at all but at the moment i am finding it very difficult to link the eccentric behavour of some of the characters to the plot still perhaps all will be reveled
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Post by skylark on Jul 11, 2009 14:57:30 GMT
Mmm....I wonder if a detective story is a bit ambitious because none of us have a clue about the plot, who dunnit etc.. Or if we do, we will have a different person in mind to everyone else. We ain't mind readers!
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Post by Sheriff Moto on Jul 11, 2009 15:14:14 GMT
it was moto who started it...yer ner It's all a blur
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Post by PeterL on Jul 11, 2009 20:11:16 GMT
I don’t think the idea was too ambitious all though perhaps the idea of combining it with a ghost story was
True none of us have a clue about the plot but my idea was for it to be revealed as the story unfolded With each post following on , from the Last until eventually the case is solved
But reading through all the story this morning about Moto fiasco crashing through skylights and posts about cheese It seemed to me that this is no longer what I intended it to be a detective story but a comedy
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Post by maggie on Jul 11, 2009 20:31:55 GMT
Let it be a comedy then!
I think a comedy would be ....... a comedy, funny!!
The contributors would find it easy and ...... funny!
;D
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Post by PeterL on Jul 11, 2009 20:51:23 GMT
Ok if that is what others want
Iwill go by their wishes
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Post by maggie on Jul 11, 2009 21:23:17 GMT
But I don't know if it's what the others want.
Do we want a comedy?
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Post by maggie on Jul 11, 2009 21:32:21 GMT
with the main character as Moto Fiasco? ;D Trouble is, when the story is not intended as a comedy, then it will be .... when we want it to be, it might turn out to be serious!!
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Post by PeterL on Jul 11, 2009 22:13:54 GMT
with the main character as Moto Fiasco? ;D Trouble is, when the story is not intended as a comedy, then it will be .... when we want it to be, it might turn out to be serious!! Perhaps in all future stories the thread starter should say if they want it to be a serious story or a comedy
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